22A Elevator pitch
2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch.
Most of the feedback I received was positive. It was very encouraging to see people approve of my presentation and say that the delivery was solid.
3) What did you change, based on the feedback?
Based on feedback, I chag=nged the camera angle and dressed up a little more for my elevator pitch.
Being this the third time doing an elevator pitch, I definitely got more comfortable in front of the camera and speaking. At first, it felt awkward for me to stand in front of the camera and try to recite the memorized script that I had, but this time, I felt significantly more comfortable.
Good job on the last elevator pitch. Putting the problem that many people come across with, losing batter on phone, was a great way to start. It made the pitch relatable. I would suggest explaining how the phone regenerates battery and why it doesn't need be plugged in for a charge.
ReplyDeleteHi Jeff,
ReplyDeleteI loved your elevator pitch! I thought your pitch was very presentable and easy to follow. I thing your delivery was solid this time around too. I definitely thought you seemed more comfortable in this pitch in terms of being in front of the camera and memorizing a script. I also liked how you made your elevator pitch in a way that connected to the audience. Overall, great post!